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I love him once,
That boy that made me smile,
The boy who took away all of my fears.

He was everything to me
And I never wanted to lose him.
I never wanted to see him hurt
Because I couldn’t bear to see him in pain.

He was the guy who made me feel alive.
He made me believe in who I was
And he made me see who I really am.
He’s the guy who cared about me
More than anything.

I wanted to keep him safe,
I wanted to make sure
That no one would ever hurt him,
But I couldn’t have him.
I wasn’t allowed to love him
Because I was told that I couldn’t.

So I lost my feelings for him.
I gave up on trying to love him,
But as long as I live I will always care about him.
I will always want what’s best for him
And I never want to see him hurt.

I loved that boy once,
That boy that made me smile,
The boy who took away all of my fears,
But I’ll always care about him,
And he’ll always be on my mind.
Let me know what you think about this one.
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AloiseBrennan Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know exactly what this feels like. It hurts sometimes, but then you remember why you love them so much and all you care about is that they are happy. It feels weird to think that even when you've gotten over the fact that you had feelings for them, you'll never love them less. You just know that you can't have that love from them in return and you force yourself to accept it.

This describes it all so plainly, and it's sweetly nostalgic. I'm glad that it's not bitter and heartbroken :)
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AngelofLight03 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much, and you are completely right about everything you said.
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AloiseBrennan Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :)
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Gale-OneOfMany Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very well written! It reminds me in a way of myself and an old friend. Nicely done :)
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AngelofLight03 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you :D
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