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Why do you love her?
She doesn't know you,
She doesn't understand.

She has everything,
That I want in her arms.
You pay no attention
To the ones who love you.

What do you see in her
That you don't see in me?
Sure, she'd pretty,
Yeah, she's smart,
But so am I.

I guess jealousy
Has taken over,
And has clouded my mind.
I envy everything she has,
Because I don't have you in my life.
Let me know what you think about this one.
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feekmasterson Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is beautiful. sadly, i can relate a to it. i dont know if you were writing from personal experience, but i sort of applied some of my own to it (foolish i know lol). but regardless, its a very beautiful poem. great work!
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AngelofLight03 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much.
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