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Every time I saw you,
I couldn't help but stare.
Your beautiful eyes
Melted into mine,
And they made my heart skip a beat.

When you spoke,
It was like time stopped,
And everything stood still
Except for you and me.

I've never had a crush on someone
That made me feel this way.
Everything you did took my breath away.
The sad part about all of this is you don't even know.

You don't know that when you look at me,
I fall that much harder.
You have no idea that when you speak to me,
You put butterflies in my stomach.

Every time I saw you,
I couldn't help but stare.
You're beautiful eyes
Melted into mine,
And you made my heart skip a beat.
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~xXblackshadowloveXx Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is totally how I felt before he actually knew my feelings....
You are an amazing poet.
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~AngelofLight03 Feb 21, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much. :D
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~xXblackshadowloveXx Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem, you deserve it!
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:iconkatragoness:
Exactly how i felt about my first serious crush.... :)
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~AngelofLight03 Jan 6, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome.
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~Lilithmae1231 Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like this, it's very good and it has a nice rhythm. :D

One thing, though: "You're beautiful eyes" should be "Your beautiful eyes" :)
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~AngelofLight03 Jan 6, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you, and I am glad that you liked it.
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~Lilithmae1231 Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No problem! :)
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~DinosurGirl Jan 4, 2013  Student Writer
it flows lovely and it's beautiful(:
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~AngelofLight03 Jan 6, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you.
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