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You could have told me the truth,
But instead you decided to lie to me.

Come on I'm not stupid,
I know very well that you were lying.
You're not that hard to figure out.

You could have told me that we were over,
But instead you chose to mess with my emotions.

You shouldn't play with my emotions,
Because I may just lose it.

Just because I was fragile a long time ago,
Doesn't mean that I am not now.

You could have told me that you didn't care,
Maybe then I would have left.

You're not worth my time,
if you just don't care.

But this time around I'm telling you.
You're not worth my tears,
and i won't settle for anything less than I deserve.
Let me know what you think, and I am sorry that I have not posted in a while.
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AloiseBrennan Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I just have to say..."YEAH!" I understand how that goes. Makes you want to punch them.

I love how simply and plainly this is written. The words don't have to be flowery to make this a great poem :)
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AngelofLight03 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much.
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AloiseBrennan Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :D
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urbuddiondreamcrack Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
Nice poem. I like the emotions you conveyed in the writing, definitely heartfelt. Great job. ^__^
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AngelofLight03 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you. :D
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urbuddiondreamcrack Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
You're welcome...Keep up the awesomeness!
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AngelofLight03 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Student Writer
I will. :D
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urbuddiondreamcrack Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
Good!
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AngelofLight03 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks.
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